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 			- General population
 			- NTD community
 			- Affected communities
-		- First impression credibility: We establish a compelling visual identity and maintain an active, professional online presence to show, and imply, the project is serious and trustworthy.
+		- First impression credibility: We establish a compelling visual identity and maintain an active, professional online presence to show that the project is serious and trustworthy.
 		- Scientific impact: we can help the publishing of results reach a greater audience with press releases, media training and the creation of supplementary materials like explanatory videos
-		- Promoting the community
+		- Helping promote the community acceptance of the new treatment approach, both