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 - TODO COMPARTIR campaña de lavado de manos con [[UTCNTDs]] 
   SCHEDULED: <2024-10-15 Tue>
 	- Dear colleagues in the CCG,
-	  At Mundo Sano we've prepared a campaign for Global Handwashing Day we'd like to share with you. We think it strikes a good balance between information and emotion, with a call-to-action video we think is very good. We've already made versions of the 50-seconds-long video in Spanish, English, Filipino, Indonesian and Amharic.
+	  At Mundo Sano we've prepared a campaign for Global Handwashing Day we'd like to share with you. We think it strikes a good balance between information and emotion, and includes a call-to-action video we think is very good. We've already made versions of the 50-seconds-long video in Spanish, English, Filipino, Indonesian and Amharic.
 	  If you find it useful and think you could use it in another language, please get in touch and we'll do our best to make it happen.
 	  We'd also be grateful if you consider sharing, reposting or liking it. Here are the links for our campaign:
 		- Twitter/X:
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 	- TODO COMPARTIR la campaña del día de lavado de manos con [[STOP2030]] 
 	  SCHEDULED: <2024-10-15 Tue>
 		- Dear all,
-		  Today is Global Handwashing Day and at Mundo Sano we've prepared a social media campaign. We think it strikes a good balance
+		  Today is Global Handwashing Day and at Mundo Sano we've prepared a social media campaign. We think it strikes a good balance between information and emotion, and includes a call-to-action video we think is worth the watch (it's less than 1 minute long, too).
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