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 - TODO COMPARTIR campaña de lavado de manos con [[UTCNTDs]] 
   SCHEDULED: <2024-10-15 Tue>
 	- Dear colleagues in the CCG,
-	  At Mundo Sano we've prepared a campaign for Global Handwashing Day we'd like to share with you. We think it strikes a good balance between information and emotion, and includes a call-to-action video we think is very good. We've already made versions of the 50-seconds-long video in Spanish, English, Filipino, Indonesian and Amharic.
-	  If you find it useful and think you could use if  another language, please get in touch and we'll do our best to make it happen.
+	  At Mundo Sano we've prepared a campaign for Global Handwashing Day we'd like to share with you. We've already made versions of the 50-seconds-long video in Spanish, English, Filipino, Indonesian and Amharic. 
+	  If you find it useful and think you could use it translated to another language, please get in touch and we'll do our best to make it happen.
+	  I
 	  We'd also be grateful if you consider sharing, reposting or liking it. Here are the links for our campaign:
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 		- LinkedIn: