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 				- More focus on you, Arancha (if she goes) and your adult working partners than on children (using their images is more contentious).
 				- Maybe of the PhD students?
 				- Lab work, sample recollection, result analysis. We want to show our endeavour is primarily scientific.
-				- Don't be afraid to gather video of things not going alright. Quite a few people have already praised to me Arancha's talk in the Simposio precisely because it was not clear-cut. It didn't show
+				- Don't be afraid to gather video of things not going alright. Quite a few people have already praised to me Arancha's talk in the Simposio precisely because it was not clear-cut. It didn't show great results, but the struggle to get them. That is more interesting as a story, and also closer to the truth.
+				- How comfortable are you speaking to a camera?
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