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   SCHEDULED: <2024-10-15 Tue>
 	- Dear all,
 	  At Mundo Sano we've prepared a campaign for Global Handwashing Day we'd like to share with you. We think it strikes a good balance between information and emotion, with a call to action video we're proud of. We've made versions in Spanish, English, Filipino, Indonesian and Amharic.
-	  If you find it useful and think you could use it in another language, please get in touch 
-	  We'd be grateful if you consider sharing
+	  If you find it useful and think you could use it in another language, please get in touch and we'll do our best to make it happen.
+	  We'd also be grateful if you consider sharing it with your audiences.
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 - # #Tareas
 	- DONE PENSAR posts sobre la [[Red de Laboratorios]]